Zombie Apocalypse p.2 By Jack.M

We went back into the office after defeating all the zombies.Suddenly all Jack heard was his name.It was his mom calling him for school.”It was just a dream”said Jack.Come on Jack don’t be late for school.”Alright mom”said Jack.So Jack got dressed washed his teeth and brushed his face{that was a joke if anyone thinks that was a mistake}.He had his breakfast.Then they got in the car and went to school.”Have a great day Jack”said mom.”Bye mom love you”said Jack.When Jack got into the yard no-one was there.So he checked the main building,still no-one.He checked his class no-one at all.”I wonder where there gone????”

4 thoughts on “Zombie Apocalypse p.2 By Jack.M”

  1. Haha Nice one ED and aswell I THINK IT’S REALY MYSTERIOUS MAYBE IT WAS ACTUALLY REAL??? OR WAS IT? TAN TAN TAMM LOL XD REALY LIKED IT AND WOULD LOVE MORE BY YOU JACK Hahhahaha luv it! 😉 -Maksim

  2. Hi Jack! I read part one of the story and both of them are AWESOME!
    I hope there’s a part three.
    I wonder why no one was was at the school? Maybe there was a zombie apocalypse?
    Also I can’t help but notice that you ‘brushed your face’. You’re supposed to brush your knee caps.
    I’m disappointed. 🙁
    Mrs Boyce’s Class
    Paulos

  3. Ooooooh I wonder if Jack is still dreaming?? Or is it more of a nightmare? I want to read more!!! Good work, great ending to keep the reader’s interest too. Keep up the good work!

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