WK9: The Patropotist And The Hypnotation

On the 10/10/14, I was walking through the City Square then I saw human ghosts around me in my vision. I was scared and I quickly ran away from the ghosts. As I was running, I went into my friend’s house to cool down. After that, I was in my friend’s house and my friend James said ” I could sleep in his house for the night”, I said “okay”.

The next day, I went back to the City Square to face my fear but  my fear was just in my mind. The funny thing is that I was hypnotized by my worst enemy the Patropotist. All the things I wrote aren’t true.

9 thoughts on “WK9: The Patropotist And The Hypnotation”

  1. Hi Fortune,
    I like the way it was just in his mind,
    Where was he at the time,
    Bye for now from Naglis
    Mrs Boyce’s class

  2. Hi Fortune I liked your story and when you said in the story you were hypnotised by your worst enemy I hope you get a showcase and see ya

    Filip

  3. I like when he went to city square and saw ghost and went to his friends house and stayed for the night and went back to city square and saw that it was in his head.
    By Collins mrrussellsclass

  4. Hi Fortune it sounded like you were really scared you friend James was kind to let you sleep in his house for the night. Keep up the good work from Matthew D Mrs Boyce’s class

  5. Hi Fortune,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I didn’t expect that ending. I think there’s the making of another story here.
    I’d like to know about your worst enemy the Patropotist.
    Keep up the good work and thanks again for all the commenting you do.
    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/

  6. Wow fortune i love your story. I really like the twist in the story, and like The funny thing is that I was hypnotized by my worst enemy the Patropotist. All the things I wrote aren’t true. It was amazing.

    Excel mrrussellsclass

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