Wk7:Why my brother hates me(like a lot he hates me)

This was like a few years ago.Me and my brother were playing hide and seek, I was on and he was hiding,when I gave up because I didn’t find him so  I sat on a pillow on a chair when I sat down I heard glass breaking.It was my brothers tablet he left it under the pillow.It was twice as bad when he walked into the room.He looked at me like he was going to kill Me,I dropped the tablet and ran for my live.I ran to my bedroom as the door slammed,I knew I was in deep trouble.

4 thoughts on “Wk7:Why my brother hates me(like a lot he hates me)”

  1. Hey Tom,
    This is such a good story, I like how the fear really comes across. Just a quick note to keep an eye out for your punctuation.

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