WK:5 my most precious thing.

My most favourite thing in the world is a living thing.It has 4 legs it has a tail and it has big brown and black spots on his body and the rest of it’s body is white, and his name is bolt It’s a he.I got it in 2011, when I was five years old.He eat’s very thing he can find and he hate’s being alone when me and my family go off some were.It barks all day long when people pass by my house.It allows  jumps very were when I come back from school or some place.I walk him ever day so he is happy all the time…


7 thoughts on “WK:5 my most precious thing.”

  1. Hi Tom,
    I like the way you described the thing perfectly and I think it is a dog and I hope you write more stories.Please visit my story on hptss://mrrussell.100wc.net/My-Smart-Pet/

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  2. Great job with your writing this week, Tom. You described your precious item very well – especially when you said “It barks all day long when people pass by my house”. That helped me to figure out that it must be… your dog! Great work, keep it up!

  3. Hi Tom,
    It’s your dog! You could be describing my dog too. She has the same colours and barks at everything and everybody. She even barks at falling leaves which is very funny at this time of year.
    You’ve done a great job describing how special Bolt is to you. Dogs are definitely special.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

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