Wk5 My precious

They are very annoying.  When I do my homework they take my bucks and I have to chase them to get it back. They have lots of toys that make so much noise. My nan and granddad always give them sweets so ther e hipper after that. When one of them has a toy the other screams for it. They reck my head the only way to escape them is to put my couch in front of my door. They go to bed at 7:00pm and they get up at 6:30am and they love my dog.

5 thoughts on “Wk5 My precious”

  1. Really great work this week, Jamie. I am going to guess that you are talking about sisters? I think that all brothers and sisters say the same things about each other! I used to think that my brother and sister were head wrecking too – but now we are all grown up, and we are good friends. Take deep breaths!!! Keep up the good work 🙂

  2. Hi Jamie,
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  3. This made me laugh so much. I could really empathise with you. I remember having a very annoying little brother and a bossy older sister. Now though, we’re all adults and the very best of friends. I’m sure you’ll feel the same about your siblings when you’re older.

  4. Dear Jaime,
    Your writing is well described and you make the object hard to guess. What is your object? Is it little kids? Overall, I understand what is being described.
    Nice Job,
    Sydney

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