Wk4: Halloween party.

One day it was Halloween. Me and all my friend and my dog. Went  trick or treating,We were all wearing costumes but my dog was’nt wearing one  because he’s a dog so I just gave him glasses to wearing we called him,and the dog was wearing glasses.So are first house we went to,the man thought that my dog was a bear so he ran back inside.The second house we went to,The Women  thought that my dog was a boy wearing glasses so she handed some sweats to  my dog.Then my dog bit her hand and then she went to the hospital.So there was are Halloween ruined for all of us.By the way she sued  us for €12500.

 

 

 

 

6 thoughts on “Wk4: Halloween party.”

  1. Tom, that line about a man thinking your dog was a bear is just hilarious! What a shame that your dog bit that woman. And that she sued you – oh dear! Well done on writing your story this week 🙂

  2. Hi Tom,

    I like the way your story is spooky and scary and I hope you do more.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  3. Hi Tom,

    I like the way the man thought the dog was a bear and keep up the good work.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  4. Very funny Tom good story. I loved when the man thought your dog was a bear and the woman handed the dog candy. Keep up the good story writing

    Ben C check out my WK 5 and 4 story on mmrussellsclass

  5. Hi Tom,
    I like how you based your story around Halloween. I wonder if your dog liked the glasses? What a shame he bit the woman. Keep up the good work!
    Ms Mc Namee
    msmcnameesclass.100wc.net

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