Wk4: The dog and his magic glasses

Once there was a fella named josh .he’s very posh  he had a dog called Ben. he loved to go to the park in with josh .so there we where there was a mysterious per of glasses me and went over .boom and the dog was wearing glasses . He made a weird face but why.because he was wearing glasses . Boom post it on the internet we’ll be known worldwide . 1115 comentes in 30 seconds. Every dog competition wanted Ben in the the world we picked one. It was dog surfing we  went down to miami . There where lots of dogs . It was Ben turn it terns  out without bens . Glasses he was nothing.

3 thoughts on “Wk4: The dog and his magic glasses”

  1. Poor Ben – maybe he just wasn’t able to see what he was doing without the glasses, Roy? He sure got a lot of comments in 30 seconds! Well done on writing your story early this week 🙂

  2. Hi Roy,
    I like the way your story has a bang and I hope you write more.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

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