Wk17 The detective!!!

It was dark night then boom the alarm went. The house next door had a detective his name was Mark “I must investigate next door”. You see the next door neighbour was on holiday in span. Mark checked his clock  and it was 11:00 pm mark sprung up and got changed then out the door. By the time he had got changed and ran out the man had cycled away. Mark whent into the house looking for clues he fond a red snake in a cage. Mark whent back out and saw something on the ground skid mark  on the ground he followed them he fond the house and confident him

2 thoughts on “Wk17 The detective!!!”

  1. Jamie, “It was a dark night…” engages the reader. It makes them think something bad might be about to happen. It was good how you used the dialogue for Mark, the detective. I also like how you used the clue of “skid marks”. It creates some excitement in the story.

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