WK15: Finn The Peace Winner

In the beginning of the world, there were 2 ornery countries that always fight since the beginning of time. I’m going to tell you a story about Finn The Peace Winner. By the way, Penecus and Genoc were the 2 countries.

There was a astute,fearful boy named Finn that lived between the battle of Penecus and Genoc. Finn was fed up of the battle because all the ammunitions that Penecus and Genoc fight with,it blow up people in Finn’s destitute country called Finsland.

Finn had a plan to stop the battle but the plan failed. The next plan he tried was brilliant but it made the battle worse.

The 3rd and final plan Finn tried was to bring the presidents together and it wasn’t easy but they eventually agreed to come. First, they started to quibble then Finn sang a peasful song ( get it ) called A Song Of Peace next, they somehow became friends. It came to a point where they had to sign a contract that Penecus and Genoc will never fight again.

After that, the feast was over and Finn was very ecstatic that Penecus’s president and Genoc’s  president are friends now.

4 thoughts on “WK15: Finn The Peace Winner”

  1. Hi Fortune,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    It’s an awful pity that there aren’t more people like Finn in this world. It would be a much better place.
    Good work – as always -this week.
    Happy New Year to you & your classmates.
    I look forward to reading more of your adventures in 2018.
    Best Wishes,
    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)

  2. Hi there Fortune,
    That was a really good story with a happy ending.
    I really liked the way you gave those people some very interesting names.
    It reminded me of my story where the two king were battling each other.
    It got me thinking, why were they fighting at first. :-S
    Thank you very much for commenting on my story, please come back and comment on week 16.
    Laurynas, Mrs O Sullivan’s class. 😎

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