Wk:12 The white sandwich

Once there was a man named John. He was a very energetic person. He was about to go off for a jog, but decided to eat a sandwich. He got two slices of white bread, some ham, cheese and made it. He ate it really fast and then he hurried out the door, because it looked like it was about to rain. But he was missing something. His Fitbit was not working, because he was missing a battery, so he ran back into the house to get it. He came back from his half hour jog, and he was tired.

3 thoughts on “Wk:12 The white sandwich”

  1. Hi Sean,

    Thank you for your 100WC entry this week. Well done for including all the words in a realistic story. I like how you have named your character and he made my favourite sandwich too. Reading all these stories about sandwiches is making me hungry! I wonder what happened to the battery in his Fitbit. It’s a bit unusual that it just disappeared! Keep trying hard with your writing.

    Mrs McG (Team 100WC)

  2. Hi Sean,
    I loved your piece it was very descriptive and you used more interesting words than boring words. And that’s a good thing because you used descriptive words such as energetic and hurried. It was so cool but I wish you would have bold the words that were the prompt for that week. I have a fit bit to but I don’t use it as much anymore. It’s out of battery so I can’t use it and I don’t know were my charger is.
    Happy writing,
    Mackenzie in Illinois
    Come check out my blog https://kidblog.org/class/rays-1718-pm-rockstars/posts/9mtbby4pz8fppkc1agic647xy

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