Wk11: the black Devil

Once upon a time there is a devil over there he just standing there it was getting creepy .I didn’t know what to do so  I was going for a walk 2 hours later it was still there it was creepy .so I went home and told my mam and daddy that there’s a black devil over there since 2 hours ago and my mam said what is there  I  said yes There is my dad said let’s go and look so we went down there my mam said are you kidding me. Ok let’s go home and forget about that ok we went home we all lived in a happy ending by Dylan

7 thoughts on “Wk11: the black Devil”

  1. Hi Dylan I like the start when the devil was just standing there it really wanted me to read on really good work Dylan I love it

    -Mrrussellsclass
    -Thomas

  2. Hi Dylan I like the start when the devil was just standing there it really wanted me to read on really good work Dylan I really like it keep it up

    -Mrrussellsclass
    -Thomas

  3. Hi Dylan i really like the start when the devil is just standing there it really made me read on

    [Mrrussellsclass

    [Thomas

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