Wk10.the lost boy

Once upon a time there was a boy called John  and he was lost he was a loner and had no friends he was so sad he had no family he’s family died and John is now alone he was so sad that he didn’t know what to do  he was so sad that he wanted someone to help him he really missed his family he’s friends died as well  he wanted him to give him money he really wanted his family alive but it didn’t happen he was just crying because he had no one playing with him or giving him money he didn’t know what to do this is a really saddest story ever by Dylan quigley

3 thoughts on “Wk10.the lost boy”

  1. I’m practically in tears here Dylan. This really is a very sad story. I think you were so caught up in the emotion of it all that you forgot the prompt! Nevertheless I enjoyed your story…. Now where are my tissues…..

  2. Oh my goodness. This surely is the saddest story ever Dylan. I wonder if your next piece of writing might include a way to brighten John’s life. I think he needs friendship more than money don’t you? How might you approach him and help to make his life more bearable.

    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Plymouth, New Zealand

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