It was a cold and misty night. Me and my brother Jack were playing hide and seek because we thought it would be scary. I started on, I had to count to 60. We began at our house. When 60 was up I started looking for him. I searched frantically for him and could not find him, then I realized I have not looked in the graveyard yet, when I got there one grave really stood out and it was my brothers name , date of birth and when he died which was when I finished counting . When I got home on the halls wall it said in crimson red, YOUR NEXT. NOOOOO!!! I shouted
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HI Ben Q
I liked your story because it was very interesting and I really liked the ending.
Keep up the good work.
Hi Ben Q ,
I really think that’s a scary story especially when it said in crimson red “YOUR NEXT !!”. Keep up the excellent work. Please comment on my story at https://mrrussell.100wc.net/WK29:-The-Fricnight/
From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class
Wow! I like your use of capital letters Ben. They create IMPACT don’t they. I’m also pleased that kids still like to get out on a misty night to scare themselves by playing hide and see. 🙂
Be careful with all your spelling won’t you. – ‘you’re’, not your.
Thanks for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Zealand