In the beginning I was just a little baby. Ever since then I have been on a learning journey. On this journey I have learnt to crawl,walk, talk, feed myself and learnt to use the toilet by myself. I will always remember the first time I rode a bike with no stabilizers. My dad was helping me at first but when I glanced back at him I was freely riding and I felt just great. And I am still learning now in Mr. Russell’s class, and this all started in the beginning.
6 thoughts on “WK15: My Little Story”
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Hi Ben Q,
I like the way you were talking about childhood and keep up the fantastic work. If I was a teacher I will nominate your story because it’s absoulutly brillant!!!!! Please comment on my story at https://mrrussell.100wc.net/WK15:-Finn-The-Peace-Winner/
From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class
Good story Ben I like how you put what you learn as a child and we are still learning something new everyday
Check out my story on mrrussell.100wc.net
Time travel
From Ben.C
Shaun I am just fascinated with your story I love joes super powers shapeshifter keep on writing stories well done
Hi Ben Q
I liked your story because its great fun learning to ride your bike for the first time.
are you allowed to ride the bike to school ?
BEN H
Hi Ben.
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
I loved how you used the prompt. We are all on that learning journey. I hope it takes you to wonderful places.
Good work this week.
Happy New Year to you & your classmates.
I look forward to reading more of your adventures in 2018.
Best Wishes,
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/
Hi Ben
WOW! What a fantastic story. I loved it.
Great flow from one bit of the story to the next.
Keep writing.
Best wishes
Mrs Phillipson
Team 100WC