Week4: Apollo 11

NASA is sending a brand new rocket to the moon they tested it for years. NASA called this mission Apollo 11 everything was safe. “We are ready to take off “ and so they did everything went smoothly with the take off. Three days later they heard the news “we touched were on the moon. Those words made every one happy. A day later NASA  heard bad  news that the rocket would not take off. Over in NASA they had an argument they said  to use emergency launch the pilot yelled “I can’t “. When it would not take off when NASA sent an emergency rocket but when they got there the people weren’t alive

2 thoughts on “Week4: Apollo 11”

  1. Dear David,
    I like the idea for your story. I am sorry that people died in the end. I hope that in reality NASA probes are successful, with no casualties. Keep being creative and inspired to write.
    All the best,
    Miss Milena Djurovic, a teacher at BIS of Belgrade

  2. Hi David,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    You’ve written a sad story this week but thanking the real Apollo 11 Mission was more successful.
    We’ve been reading about it this week during Space Week.
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


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