Week 4: The Murder

One day a police patrol were going around town.They saw blood on the ground.It led into a dark and scary alley.They looked around the corner and there lied a manonthe ground.He had no pulse.There was a dog and the was dog wearing glasses!There was a knife on the ground.There were fingerprints on the knife.They brought it back to the station to investigate.They found out who it was and it was Johnny Johnson.They went to his house but it was to late.A couple months later they tracked him down to a small apartment in New York.They caught him and put him in jail

5 thoughts on “Week 4: The Murder”

  1. Your title had me hooked straight away, Peter! I wonder if the dog had anything to do with this mysterious crime? Anyway, I’m glad that the police caught Johnny Johnson. Keep up the great work!

  2. Hi Peter,

    I like the way the caught Johnny Johnson and Keep up the good work.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  3. Hi Peter,

    I like the way the captured Johnny Johnson and Keep up the good work.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  4. Hi Peter I loved your story because it was scary.
    It reminds me of my story.
    Who was the dead person?
    From Dylan Mrs Boyce’s class

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