Week 4: Superdog

Every night has been protected by a dog and the dog was wearing glasses. His name is lolk he had a sidekick was a cat with knickers. Her name is Mon. They flew to awa base. Awa is evil. They flow out. Mrrussellsclass came and said what and left awa and said nothing until the base blew up. “I blame you lolk and mon he sied  hated them [awa hated them] . no no no no no no no no seid awa.awooooooooooooooooooooooooooo seid lolk as they ran in to the nigt

5 thoughts on “Week 4: Superdog”

  1. A cat with knickers?!?! Kevin, I had a good laugh at that! I wonder why they wanted the base to blow up? Good job writing your story early this week.

  2. Hi Kevin

    I like the way you wrote Mr.Russell’s class and it’s kind of a spy dog story and I hope you write more.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  3. Hi Kevin,
    I like the way the dog Lolk protected the night and I hope you do more.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  4. Hi Kevin,
    Your story is awesome I like the title of your story that probable my favorite part of the story. Also, it would be really cool if there was really a super dog have you ever seen this show with a super dog. If you want to see a book about a super dog I would look at this book called Dog man it almost like your story. Something that you can improve on is fix you spelling like the last word is spelled wrong.

    Make sure you check out my page https://kidblog.org/class/rays-1718-am-rockstars/posts?author=25r8vz5yxqqxnqk8r8hegzr4u&status=published&status=review&status=draft
    from Madison Illinois.

Comments are closed.