Week 4 Leon’s Story

Long long ago in America there was a meeting from the Man United football team people from Ireland were getting flights over to America  the people people of Ireland where so excited about one thousand people started getting on the planes so they could meet the man United football team one plane one plane would not move so the pilot really tried and tried when it just wouldn’t take off it took off

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  1. Hi Leon and thank you for your 100WC story. I was immediately caught up in the excitement of the crowd and your own excitement as you wrote. I like the story a lot but think a couple of well placed full stops would allow me to read it without getting out of breath. Just a thought for your next story, well done on the atmosphere though.

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