Week 1 by Aurimas

One nice summer day [I was a ninja] I was on holiday when I fought so! many bad guys and then I was eating and then it happened over the corner then the bad guys came I took the note and ran …I RAN AS QUICK AS I CAN……    but they got me they came to bad guys lair up on the mountain and I thought… well what a start… the bad guy said ha ha [we fought] thats all what you got I SAID NO ! i hit him as hard as I can all the ninjas came out of bad guy and we won ahand wata ending! …..THE END….

4 thoughts on “Week 1 by Aurimas”

  1. Well done on completing your first 100 Word Challenge story Aurimas! That was an action filled story – why is it that the bad guys always have their lair in these awkward places?! Maybe it’s to make it hard to escape. Good effort, well done!

  2. Hi Aurimas. What an action packed adventure story. I’d like to know what kind of Ninja you are. Are you a Zen Extreme Ninja, an Orange Ninja or even a SANTA Ninja… (Are you impressed?) Well done on beating the bad guy – That usually happens in all good films!

  3. Hi Aurimas
    What an action packed 100 word challenge – I could barely draw breath as I was reading it. I’m glad you had a happy ending. Here’s a little bit of a challenge for your Ninja self if you’re up for it – I challenge you to make a Ninja effort to use as many different words as you can for the word ‘then’ – I had to do that once and while it’s challenging it is possible (with the right Ninja of course). Well done. Very exciting first 100 word challenge.
    Ms O’Keeffe
    Team 100wc

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