The Zombie Apocalypse p.1 by Jack.M

Me and Gabrielle  were in the office and Gabrielle looked a bit nervous.”What if Brian has a stupid plan”said Gabrielle.”Its a zombie apocalypse,I think he’ll have a good idea”.said Jack.So we went to the meeting room.Emily was going crazy and Liam was shaking in the corner.”And I thought well what a start”. Brian told us the plan. It was so that me and Liam distract the zombies so Emily and Gabrielle can sneak up on them Emily will have a knife since she’s good with melee and Gabrielle will have a handgun and try get a head-shot on them so we went out did the plan and Sophie showed up and didn’t use a weapon but was a one died people got really hurt but we killed all the zombies.FOR NOW!!!!!!

8 thoughts on “The Zombie Apocalypse p.1 by Jack.M”

  1. Well done on completing your first 100 Word Challenge Jack! I’m not a fan of zombies – there’s something very creepy about them. I wonder if all the zombies are gone now – or are more just waiting for their time to strike? Good work, well done!

  2. Zombies are scary to some people but its a great story! Maybe there will be more apocalypse’ to come.

  3. Hi Jack, Oooh I’m freaked out by stories about Zombies and your story is no different. It sounds to me like there’s going to be a second part to this story Jack. I can’t see the actual prompt in this story, but I guess you may have been keeping it for the next part? Not to worry! I really enjoyed reading it. I just hope I don’t have nightmares now.

  4. Two words “For Now” and this brilliant 100 word challenge is left on a scary cliffhanger. Now I don’t know if I’ll be able to sleep – I knew when I saw the title that I shouldn’t have read it but….I love a mystery and couldn’t resist. I really like how you used the prompt. Great writing for your first 100 word challenge. Keep up the good work Jack!
    Ms O’Keeffe
    Team 100wc

  5. Well done Jack, I really enjoyed your story even though I don’t like Zombies. They are never really gone, are they?
    You have some great vocabulary in your story and you’ve used the prompt really well. Keep up the great writing.

  6. Hi Jack! This story is really different to all the others I read. I’m ready for the next part but I don’t know how you can fit the prompt into a zombie Apocalypse. I wonder why you didn’t run away?
    Mrs Boyce’s Class

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