One day,there was a Professor called Tom,was trying to find a cure of a disease called pdc stades for purple dead crocodile.It killies more than 250-678 crocodiles a week.After weeks tom finally found a cure for this disease.But then tom dropped the cure it affected his brain and much more.He went Twisted and stared to attack the other professor.A guard ran  into the room shoot tom more than 3 shots to the head.BUT he did not die.Tom escaped for the lapator and ran for his life.The last 678 crocodiles were left they are still alive but Tomthe twisted profession was still out there I hope the police got Tom.


  1. What a super idea for a story, Tom. So much mystery and adventure! Did the police ever catch Tom? I kind of hope they did, so that they can find a cure and restore him to normal. Great work this week, well done!

  2. Well done on a great story this week Tom. You’ve done a great job. Your story has lots of action and adventure. I wonder how the professor survived that attack, and where is he now??
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c

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