The scary ghost

I was in a house I heard freaky noises I heard a ghost then he got closer I got so scared I hid he was trying to find me then ahhhh I went I ran out of here it was so scary the ghost scared the hell out of me then I hid under the table so the ghost doesn’t now where I am then I ran out of the house I called the police then they arrested him then I ran home than I hugged and kissed my family I really missed them that the end of my story The end

2 thoughts on “The scary ghost”

  1. I love your story because it was a spooky and scary story and I hope you do more.

    From,Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class 17/18

  2. What a very scary story Dylan. You did a great job this week. However, just a small piece of advice to help make your story an even better one! Read over it again and put in your full stops. It will make your story even easier to read. Well done.

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