The Revenge by Eoin

It was time. 20 years ago, I was framed by my old friend, who was the one who stole the diamonds. But I’m out of prison and it’s time for my revenge. I got my camera, with all the evidence I gathered and ran to his house. When I got there, he opened the door and I hit him on the head, HARD. Then I stole some beautiful brown diamonds on his desk and ran. I was really worried because I thought he was running after me, but I got to the police station in time, showed them the evidence and my old friend was put in jail.

6 thoughts on “The Revenge by Eoin”

  1. Hi Eoin.
    I liked the story you did.
    It reminded me of a game stealing a diamond.
    What was your friends name?
    Mrs Boyces Class Kanturk co. Cork ??.

  2. Hi Eoin.
    I loved your story.
    I’m wondering, would the guards give you something because you were put in jail for 20 years for no reason.
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce’s class

  3. Hey Eoin,
    Amazing story for this week’s 100wc. It was very good. I liked your story becauseyou had quite a few very descriptive words.
    This reminds me of a really good movie that I watched a while ago, but I can’t remember the name of it.
    Why weren’t the police questioning you? You just brought a load of diamonds, if they were smart they would’ve put you in jail again.
    Bye. Liam. Mrs Boyce’s class.

  4. Hi Doing.
    Brilliant story this week,it was very funny.
    It reminds me of some prison break story’s that end out like this.
    Did the police officers arrest you for hitting the guy that framed you.
    By Dylan O’C
    Ms.Boyces Class.

  5. Hi Eoin,
    Good story!
    You must have been really mad at your old friend.
    What happened to you after?
    By Calum
    Mrs. Boyces Class.

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