The portal

on one rainey day. There was a scienctist trying to build a portal to purple world but it was a Difficult taske so he asked for help it took 2 days to do it.all the helpers saw a purple world over in the other side.so my helpers put there suits on so they won’t go into bits and I went to it was like a twisted thing we landed on the ground. there were so many things I never saw animals there were things paintings AND THERE WAS CROCODILE it looked nice well no and the portal was closing and I was lost and THE END

4 thoughts on “The portal”

  1. Ahhh nice story Alex. this is a great story I like the way they finally built the portal

    Filip
    Mrrussells100wc.net
    Waterford

  2. I like the way your story doesn’t have a ending and I hope you do more.
    But don’t forget capital letters and punctuations.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  3. Wouldn’t a portal to another world be such a cool thing, Alekss! I hope that someone was able to find you after the portal closed. As cool as a portal would be, I wouldn’t want to be trapped on the wrong side! Keep up the good work 🙂

  4. Hi Alekss
    Thank you for sharing your writing this week. What clever scientists to create a portal into another world. I was wondering if the crocodile looked exactly like one on Earth? Do you think this is the end for your traveller or is it the beginning of a whole new adventure for him? Will he or his helpers be able to recreate the portal to get him back?
    This story reminded me of the book I’ve just read called, A Wrinkle in Time, which also has people being able to move between planets. Have you heard of the book? The movie is going to come out next year.
    Ms McKenzie (Team100WC)
    Christchurch, New Zealand

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