The monster in the cave

There is a boy named John. John lived near a cave, one day he heard a noise. He wanted to venture in. So John gathered his friends. They went to the cave; so what lies ahead of them. They entered the cave, bat’s flew out of the cave. They walked forward and heard growls John used a flashlight and saw a monster. The monster ate one of the children, they ran out of the cave. They told their parents but no one believed them, not one of them ever went back in the cave again.

The End

2 thoughts on “The monster in the cave”

  1. I love your story Jamie because it did’nt had any spelling mistakes and the punctuation was in the right places.GOOD LUCK TO THE ATHLETICS TRIALS TOMORROW.

    From,Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class 17/18

  2. Great work Jamie. I’m not one bit surprised not one of them ever went back to that cave. I’m very sad about the poor boy that was taken by the monster though. Did his family even miss him?

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