The man in the forest.

So one day I went camping with my family.the camp site we were staying at was very-strange.there was a big forest surrounding the we went for a walk in the was around 6am.Icould see a prison in a tree my dad started to scream at was 3pm. Then we got lost.AND THEN we found a red tent. We all saw a man holding a body bag . It looked like the man we saw in the heart stopped there was a knife in is hand.we ran and we saw the campsite we called the,what lies ahead of policemen’s.

2 thoughts on “The man in the forest.”

  1. Dear Tom,
    I love your story but do’nt forget your punctuation and check over your story.

    From,Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class 17/18

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