The fun house

There once was a boy named John. He likes the Fun house at the amusements. So What lies ahead of John’s adventure in the fun house.      ” I like all the rides at the amusements” said John. ” Can I go in the Fun house ” asked John, yes said his mother. John had to go up wobbly stairs and swing across a hole. There was a pool of water he had to swim across. But John is not the best swimmer. He was scared but he did it. John was so happy he made it across. He woke up and was not happy because it was a dream.

6 thoughts on “The fun house”

  1. I like your story,it’s adventurous and your punctuations were in the right place.

    From,Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class 17/18

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