The Flying Crocodile by Eoin

One night, a man called Mr Muscle was eating his breakfast while watching the news. When he saw the headlines for the morning, he spat his orange juice all over his brother,who was sitting on the sofa beside him.The headlines were that a flying crocodile escaped from Turkey Town Zoo,and flew to somewhere in Chicken Avenue.Mr Muscle almost collapsed after he saw the reward for finding the croc.”15 million euros!?” he said,” I’ll be rich!” Mr Muscle searched far and wide within the country,but couldn’t find anything. He eventually went home and somehow found the flying crocodile sitting on his toilet!”I’m RICH!” he said.

 

 

5 thoughts on “The Flying Crocodile by Eoin”

  1. “Mr. Muscle”… super name! Flying crocodiles? Turkey Town Zoo? Chicken Avenue? And a crocodile sitting on the toilet? This is one of the funniest stories I’ve read all year Eoin! Well done on using the prompt words so well! Keep up the GREAT writing!

  2. Hi Eoin,
    I loved your story and thought it as very funny that there was a flying crocodile and that Mr.Muscle spat his orange juice out on his brother.I wonder what he bought with his money.-Kayden, Mrs Boyce’s Class

  3. Hi Eoin
    Good story!
    He must have been over the moon when he found it.
    What did the man do with all the money?
    By Calum
    Mrs.Boyces Class

  4. Well done Eoin, this is a very funny story! The image of a crocodile sitting on the toilet made me laugh. That could be a bit dangerous!
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

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