The Cinema by Bartek

It was a sunny day. I was spending my time with my friend Bidybongbong (he is an alien).We were going to the cinema to watch a movie called “Stupider Jupiter”.When we got there we got free popcorn and cocamola (a different type of cola)…….. and I thought well what a start. When the movie was over my friend spilled his Cocamola and before he realized he SLIPPED!!!!! and started to roll down the stairs,it looked like he was break dancing.I didnt want it to look like i was laughing but I couldn’t hold it and I laughed.And he said “I BROKE ME BONES AHHH!!!….

6 thoughts on “The Cinema by Bartek”

  1. Well done on completing your first 100 Word Challenge story Bartek! Like you, I felt like I shouldn’t have laughed at your friend but I couldn’t help myself! I wonder what this cocamola tastes like. It sounds interesting! Good work, well done!

  2. Fabulous story Bartek. I love the name you’ve given to your alien friend. One of my favourite things to do is go to the Cinema. I’ve never heard of that film though! It sounds as if you had a great day. Not sure if your friend had such a good time though. Your last sentence made me laugh!

  3. Oh dear, your poor friend! Well done on completing your first 100 word challenge. You’ve done a great job. Keep up the great work.

  4. Hi Bartek
    Fantastic 100 word challenge! I’m still giggling thinking of your poor friend but mainly because you described him falling as looking like he was break dancing. Your story made me think about Roald Dahl whose birthday it is this coming week I think. He made up great concoctions of words and you have done similar. Well done. I loved reading this.
    Ms O’Keeffe
    Team 100 WC

  5. I love this story Bartek! It had me laughing out load as i read it. I could see this story evolving into the adventures of Bartek and Bidybongbong.

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