The boy and the scientist

There was a boy called Steve.When he went to school he was sitting next to a genius.Everyone taught he was a professor.Meanwhile Steve found school very difficult.He always wore shoes that were ment to be like crocodile’s they were called crocks.He always wore the purple ones.When he got out of school he went straight home and relaxed for a while.Then he went out with his friends and played football for a while.Then they just walked for a while.His friends abandoned him after a while.But then he saw a twisted scientist.Steve stared at him for a while and then the scientist saw him

5 thoughts on “The boy and the scientist”

  1. Great story Shaun at the end it gave me the creeps great. Keep up the great work Shaun.

    -Ben Q

  2. I like your story but poor Steve been abandoned by his friends anyway keep up the good work.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  3. Shaun,
    I could see the contrast you built between your characters–the boy who finds school difficult right next to the genius. What a clever way to include the words put forth in the prompt! The end made me feel hopeful that this twisted scientist would somehow help Steve feel more accepted. Whatever your intent, your writing made me want to know more.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

  4. I’m glad that Steve went out to play with his friends Shaun. Everyone needs to spend some time having fun with friends – and especially so if school is a bit tough. What a shame for Steve that his friends abandoned him. I hope he doesn’t team up with this twisted scientist – it could have awful results for the world! Keep up the great work!

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