The awesome family

Once upon a time I was  always helping this person who I really wanted and loved. She is a good to me. This person has red hair and I always played with her. She very nice to me she is a really lovely person. And I loved her. I loved her she is the best in the world. I love her hope I really like this person. I hope she gets me this thing for my PS4. I really hope to see her when I go home. So I’m really happy with her and she is beautiful. I loved her since was born and she named me Dylan.

5 thoughts on “The awesome family”

  1. Now, Dylan, this is a super piece of writing. I can see how much this special person means to you. And you wrote such a fantastic description too, that i think that anyone who reads it will know that you are talking about…. your mum! What a lovely story you’ve written this week. Well done and keep up the good work!

  2. Hi Dylan,
    I like the way you gave a obvious clue at the end of your story.It’s your mum and I hope you do more stories. Please visit my story at hptss://

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  3. Dylan, this is a really well written 100wc and I think I can guess your special person! I hope you showed your writing to them as it would make them feel so loved. Keep up the good work!

  4. Dear Dylan,
    Are you taking about your mom? Your writing is very descriptive of your mom. I understand your happiness with your mom, because my mom makes me happy to.
    Great Job,

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