The asteroid by Aurimas

Once in the earth every one were bored from living the same life eat sleep eat and sleep and all over again it was night time alredy I was looking out side of my window I saw something in the sky it was like asteroid going into the earth I went down the stairs I said ” mom mom the asteroid is going down into the earth” my mom was just spelling,the asteroid crashed into my back garden every one were sleeping in their bed or on the ground ,because from the first asteroid the second asteroid crashed as the smoke cleared ¬†and the asteroids disappeared and every one woke up.

6 thoughts on “The asteroid by Aurimas”

  1. I’d be terrified of an asteroid landing in the back garden, Aurimas!!! How lucky that they didn’t cause too much damage and that they disappeared without harming anyone. Well done on completing your 100 Word Challenge during the mid term break! Keep up the great writing!

  2. Well done Aurimas on doing your 100 Word Challenge during your Midterm break!
    I’d be terrified of asteroids landing in my back garden! I’m glad no one was injured.
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce

  3. Hi Aurimas. Well done on completing this while on your school break. The only thing I’m thinking about is my poor dog Mario! Mario has a little run in the back and if an asteroid landed in the back I’m afraid there would be no more Mario. How sad would that be?

  4. Well done on completing your 100 word challenge during your school holidays. Asteroids can do a lot of damage, they have caused a lot of change of the course of history. Great writing.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c

  5. What an action packed 100wc you have written. You have tried hard to create a feeling of panic by including speech into your writing. To make this even better you need to double check that you have all of your full stops in, it can be very easy to forget them when you are typing.
    Keep writing!
    Miss T
    Hampshire, England

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