The arsenal criminal

So it was 2010,Me and my police team were searching for one of the worst  criminals in the world.The criminal’s name is mrrussell(my primary school teacher  22 years ago )his 4.2 in height and he is a woo men like literally he is a woo men.He escaped prison 2 days ago. He has been seen in a hotel not so far away from the prison but he was seen carrying  a bag over his shoulder.The  next day….me and my team were heading to the hotel we walked  into is hotel room.It was shocking on the walls there were arsenal posters very where but where would we hide it all?My team said,what do you mean,I am talking about the arsenal posters or we should burn it all.


3 thoughts on “The arsenal criminal”

  1. Hi Tom,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    Mr Russell must be chuffed to be a character in your story this week and I take it that he’s an avid Arsenal supporter. Although not an Arsenal fan myself, I’d hate to see all those posters burnt.
    Good work this week.
    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)

  2. Hi Tom
    Thank you so much for sharing your writing. What did Mr Russell say when he found he was one of the worst criminals in the world? Did he take it as a compliment? I really like that you used someone you knew but you made the setting a different time. I wonder if there was a reason for the posters? Were they posters from that time or this time?
    Keep up the great writing.
    Ms McKenzie (Team 100WC Christchurch, New Zealand)

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