The amazing Pencil

One day a pencil was made.Not like all pencils created. It had dark magic but no one knew.The pencil wrote faster than the flash.Until one day I wrote with it.Before I touched the page it cursed me and then I realised that I have been turned into a  Superhero and I had called myself the Amazing Pencil.I could teleport to the  Caribbeans.I could steal people’s souls by looking at them.And had a superman punch power. But then I realised that the pencil was a monster it was 50 feet tall.Then I shouted”ME The AMAZING PENCIL AKA GABRON WILL NOT HAVE MERCY”.So what lies ahead….

3 thoughts on “The amazing Pencil”

  1. Great story Carrington! That was some pencil, it sounds terrifying! I don’t like the sound of what might lie ahead with pencils like that on the loose!
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

  2. Hello Carrington,

    Wow! A pencil with dark magic powers, a curse, transformation into a superhero and the promise of a battle between the dark magic pencil and a superhero packs so much into your entry. Adding the prompt at the end leaves the reader wondering what might happen next.

    Who might win the battle? Will the pencil be written off or the superhero erased? Well done.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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