The scary dream by Niall

Johnny  was asleep when he had a dream about a spider. The spider was bigger than his bedroom. He ran past the spider and the spider chased him down the stairs. Johnny got the keys and ran out the door. The spider chased Johnny up the street. He ran as fast as he could. When he looked back, all he could see was the spider’s big legs and hairy body. He lost the spider when he hid in a bush. He was watching every movement and hearing every sound. He looked up and what he saw was the big spider looking down at him, he woke up and it was all a dream.

4 thoughts on “The scary dream by Niall”

  1. Well done Niall. I wasn’t a huge fan of spiders anyway but this week’s 100 word challenges are really testing me. What an awful dream to have!
    Keep up the good work.
    Mts Boyce

  2. Whew! I’m glad that it wa just a dream! I’d be terrified to have a big spider looking down at me, I’m just not a fan of spiders… no matter how small they are!!! Poor Johnny, that was a tough day for him! Great effort Niall, well done!

  3. I’m so glad that was all a dream. I think I’m going to be having a lot of ‘spidery dreams’ after this week’s 100 wc! You’ve done a great job with the prompt. Your spelling and punctuation is excellent. Well done.

  4. Niall You made this so realistic that as I was reading it I forgot that it was a dream or even that Johnny was asleep. It’s a very fast, action packed 100 word challenge and your second last line frightened the life out of me. Imagine looking up and seeing a giant spider looking down at you!! I was almost relieved to discover that it was all a dream. Well done. Great writing.
    Ms O’Keeffe
    Team 100 wc

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