Pongo the Alligator wk2

Once upon a time there was an alligator named Pongo.This hurrendous name came from his owner Mr Bongo who worked as a teacher in a school in Florida. Everyday Pongo had to wear a maeve hat, scarf and gloves and Mr Bongo let the students come and see Pongo and they all laughed. Pongo thought about escaping. One idea was to eat Mr Bongo, this backfired because Mr Bongo has a very big bottom and farts all the time. Pongo had to climb over the fence and into the river he jumped. He swam and swam and never wants to see Mr Bongo again.

4 thoughts on “Pongo the Alligator wk2”

  1. Hey Eoin I really liked the part when Pongo couldn’t eat him because his butt was to big.Keep on righting👍👍👍😹

  2. Hi Eoin,
    I like the part when Mr. Pongo brought Pongo to school and Mr.Pongo’s students laughed. Keeop up the good work.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class (last year)

  3. I’m so glad for two things Eoin! 1. That Pongo escaped so that no-one can laugh at him anymore, and 2. that he didn’t eat Mr. Bongo. It would have been an awful punishment to have to eat someone with a very big bottom and who farts all the time!!! Keep up the great writing! And well done on writing your first 100 Word Challenge story!

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