Kid normal

hi my name is mike and I always move houes because my mom always gets new jobs.This all happened cause my dad had an car accident.so everybody knows that if you move houses you will have a new school well I had loads of schools it is difficult for me to fit in but for my brother it’s so easy since he’s in college he doesn’t have to move college. I have to go to a new school tomorrow the next day my mom  woke me up so I went to use the toilet but my mom who twisted and angry. We drove to school mean professor croc  who was a villain hafe crocodile wearing a purple suit this going to be fun ha ha

5 thoughts on “Kid normal”

  1. I like the way you introduce the characters but do’nt forget capital letters.Keep up the good work.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  2. Like Peter, I like the way you got inspiration from our book “Kid Normal”. This villainous half crocodile sounds like an interesting character, Al-Amin. I wonder will he be a future super villain for the heroes to have to fight? Keep up the good work!

  3. Al-Amin,
    There’s always adventure in starting new schools which your writing displays. A villain half-crocodile prof paints a very interesting picture! Never a dull moment for Kid Normal. Look for some places to add capitals and end marks. Well done!

    Mrs. Peterson
    Team 100wc
    Texas, USA

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