It is a beautiful day. And James and Jason are playing in the grass. After a few minutes their mom calls.” We are going to the lake boys. They both say “I love the lake the lake says Jason.”me too says James. Jason has a secret the secret is he is the killer of the lake. He doesn’t want to tell his mother or brother his secret.”its time to play says James.”yay says Jason I love playing. “Lets jump in the crystal clear water. Now Jason has killed many and injured many. But Jason has not killed everyone and inured everyone. So who lies ahead of the other people
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I like the part when Jason was the killer of the lake and that he did not tell anybody.
By Collins
Hi Adam loved your story the best part is when James says it’s time to play well done ??????
I love Jason cuz he’s my cousin Good story Adam
By the Stupid boy Excel
Great story Adam. I love the part Jason keeps a secret.
-Ben Q
good story adam i love the way JASON killed the lake by the way i just spilled the beans anyway from benjamin
I like your story but do’nt forget you punctuation.
From,Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class 17/18