WK6: Hurricane Ophilia

On the 16th of October a hurricane hit Ireland. It was a red alert. The country came to a standstill. It was called hurricane Ophilia. People were urged to stay inside. Three lives were lost. The power lines were down. JUST IN. A man in his late sixties was video recording in his local park when a strong gust of wind picked him up. He ended up in a very deep bog. Someone saw this from their bedroom window and called 999. It was a struggle but the man got out thanks to the girl who called 999. That is the end of the news on the hurricane Ophilia.

7 thoughts on “WK6: Hurricane Ophilia”

  1. Hi Benc love you story the best part was when he ended up in a very deep bog well done good work

    -josh mrrussell.100wc.net

  2. Hi Ben C love the report the. I wonder what would have had happened if the girl didn’t call 999 great report Ben C.

    -Ben Q
    mrrussell.100wc.net

  3. Great story Ben I feel so bad for that man who got blown away into the wind.well anyone great story Ben C

    -Isaac

  4. Hi Ben.c I really like your story because. Of the inspiration you used for your story. My class blog is msbrennocksclass.100wc.net and my name is Benito

  5. Well done Ben, great description of the destruction that was caused by Ophelia last week. I like the way you linked the current affairs to the prompt this week. It nearly reads like those tickertape comments that run across the bottom of news reports on TV especially when you said ‘Just in’.
    Great sense of urgency. Good writing, keep it up!
    Anne Marie
    Team 100wc

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