When I was just two months old both my parents past away in a fire.I was a lonely child and I was the only person saved,but got badly burned.Now I live with my grandparents only a block away from my old house.Today is the anneversary of the fire and im going back to the old house to explore it.there is a terrible chill in there.Suddenly i heard a BANG.and in the flash of lightning i saw my parents with a new child.But that new child was actually me.i could see in to the past.
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Hey Shane,
I loved your story, it is so sad that your parents past away, when you were to mouths old.
You must have bin happy when you saw your parents again, while you where looking through the future.
Good job this week Shane.
By Lily
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Hi Shane,
I really liked how you approached this week’s story – Well done!
You were brave to go back to your old house.
I think it’s something we would all like to be able to do – to see into the past.
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce
Cork.
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/
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Hi Shane.
I like your story because you looked in past.
I wish I could look in the past.
very good story well done keep it up!!!
I love your story Shane it is very interesting it was very sad your parents died when you were two.