The Haunted House by Brian

So then we got to the house.Bob said he didn’t want to go in and he ran home like a little girl and screaming. So the rest of us went in, we had no idea what to expect. Then we went inside, but the place was so old it looked like it could crumble any minute.We walked carefully up the stairs.But we could smell something and we walked inside and it was full of smoke, it took a few minutes but as the smoke cleared it was actually Bob dressed up as a we just ran out of the house back to home                                  THE             END

4 thoughts on “The Haunted House by Brian”

  1. Sounds like Bob was just playing a very mean trick on you, Brian!! I was dreading what was coming as I was reading your story – you built up the suspense so well! Well done on completing your 100 Word Challenge during the mid term break! Keep up the great writing!

  2. Hi Brian.
    Well done on completing the 100 Word Challenge during the Midterm.
    I think Brian was a good actor. He seemed to have you all fooled!
    I was glad it was only Brian in the end.
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce

  3. Hi Brian. Great story. I laughed when you said Bob ran home ‘like a little girl’, but then at the end it was the boys who ran out of the house when they got a fright. Just shows everybody can get scared. Bob sure played a trick on you!

  4. Well done on completing your 100 word challenge during your break. I agree with Avril about boys and girls both getting scared! I would definitely be running away too.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c

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