One scary Halloween night me and the lads went out in grange manor  and we saw a very tall curious man walked in a scar face mask ? so we went out tricker treating and dean said something he should not have said and all of us felt weird and we went asleep then woke up in this big mansion we new that it was the tall man we sneaked into the room were he was planning  to end us with to outher fellas and then my friend new he had to set of the fireworks pointing at him boom it hit then it hit and in the end there were going to give us coulorfull grapes

5 thoughts on “Halloween”

  1. I like the way your story is scary and I hope you keep up the good work.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class

  2. Hi there,
    I enjoyed reading your 100wc this week as it isn’t all about candy like many of the others, a refreshing change! I like the way you included lots of action and it was so exciting. Maybe next time you could include some punctuation to break your ideas up. Great work recording your story to share with an audience, I look forward to reading more!
    Sarah, Team 100Wc, New Zealand.

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