WK9: Ghost’s down town

One day I was shopping down town. I felt a shiver  down my spine going into the first shop. I thought I was seeing things moving around. I saw some red glasses I put them on. OH MY GOD. I see ghosts but they couldn’t see me. I screamed at the top of my lungs. My mum was wondering why I was screaming. I gave her the glasses. She let out the loudest scream ever. We got kicked out of the shop. I was terrified and my mum said we need to call someone. How about the MAA stands for mysterious actions association hopefully they will believe us.

3 thoughts on “WK9: Ghost’s down town”

  1. Good work Ben. I like the part where your mum puts on the red glasses and understands why you were screaming. The capitalisation in your piece is also very effective, it reflects the fear!

  2. Ben, I think the MAA had heard rumours and were just waiting for your call. Others had already seen the ghosts, but were too afraid to contact the authorities.
    Wouldn’t it be fun to create an eye grabbing header and follow it up with a (make believe) newspaper report about this. What do you think….

    Jackie (Team 100 WC)
    New Plymouth, New Zealand

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