Fancy football match wk2

It was one sunny Friday morning and there was a football match on between  tricky tackles vs mauve fc .  And this was to see who wins  the league .and there was a school at the match and the teacher name was Mr Brown and the game had kick off and there was a smuap next football pitch and the ball went into the smuap and one of the players jump into the smuap to get it and there was something in the smuap and it bit him and he sreamed  ahhh there a alligator in the smuap and it bit me and he climed out in pain The End

2 thoughts on “Fancy football match wk2”

  1. Hi Lee,
    I like the way your story is based on a football. Great story and I hope you write more.

    From Fortune in Mr.Russell’s class (last year)

  2. I don’t think anyone was expecting an alligator when they went to the football game, Lee! I suppose they had to be “snappy” when passing the ball!!! Good work, well done!

    * Try to remember to include full stops on your next story to make it even better!

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