One day there was a scientist named Johnny,who LOVED robots,and one day,he said to himself,”I’m really tired from all this work”,so he decided to make a robot to help him with his experiments.He looked amazing.Johnny felt the robot.The material felt like iron,but a lot stronger.But then, one day when he was at home sick and couldn’t come to work,the robot was hacked by a member of ISIS and started destroying everything he saw.The robot was crazy and everyone was in grave danger.Johnny tried to stop him but he was unstoppable.Suddenly, a man called Habib blew up the robot and everyone was safe. THE END… OR IS IT??!!
4 thoughts on “The Evil Robot by Eoin”
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Hi Eoin.
AMAZING story.
I loved the scientists name of Johnny.
I think this story was very very good.
David 5th class co.Cork
Now what a fantastic idea that is. If only I had a robot to help me with all my work. I’d be very very happy! I don’t like the idea of it getting hacked though. I’m so glad Habib saved the day…. Or did he???
Brilliant story Eoin! Very easy to read and visualise – wonder what happens next? Good idea to leave your readers wondering!
Ms Kealy
Well done Eoin – I really enjoyed your story.
Thank goodness Habib was able to blow up the robot.
Hopefully everyone will be safe from now on.
Keep up the good work.
Mrs Boyce
Cork.