A dream of chocolate by Ryan. G

Once there was a boy called jake and he was 10 years old,it was time for bed so he snuggled under his blanket and After 10 minutes he fell asleep,suddenly he is in a dream he looks around and he sees a sign saying Charlie and the chocolate factory,so Jake says to him self “Should i go and have a look” then he says chocolate “im doing this for you!”So he goes in and suddenly he sees a huge pool of chocolate and he dunks his head under the chocolate,but suddenly he hears foot steps behind suddendly a voice says to Jake “WHAT ARE YOURE DOEING IN MY FACTORY?” Then Jake says “i was just getting chocolate” but eventually he wakes up and moans “i wish that was real” but then Charlie appears beside and says “it is… Come with me”

3 thoughts on “A dream of chocolate by Ryan. G”

  1. Hi Ryan
    I loved the end of this story and changes the chocolate world completely. I couldn’t describe if the person that said “What are you doing in my factory?” was angry. I wonder if the person who said it was Willy Wonka?
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  2. Super, super, super story Ryan! What an incredibly cool dream to have! I love the ending to your story, when Charlie appeared and said to go with him – maybe there is more to this story! Great effort, well done!

  3. Well done Ryan – I enjoyed reading your story about chocolate. I don’t think I’ll need to eat chocolate for weeks after all the chocolate stories I’ve read this week!
    I’m glad your dream was about to come true.
    Keep up the good work.
    Mrs Boyce
    Cork

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