On the 31/10/15, my family and I went to Tramore in Waterford to have fun at the fair. My parents gave my brother and I €50.
My baby brother wanted to go to Friendland, while I wanted to go on the Spookytoral so we fissured the money and we got €25 each.
When I got to the Spookytoral, I had to pay €10 then I penetrated into the seat. After that,the ride initiated and when I was in the Spookytoral, I saw spooky things like bats and ghost then I saw a door and as the door slammed I knew that it was meant to startle somebody but it didn’t scare me.
After all that,that was the end of the jaunt.
Hi Fortune loved your stroy the best part was about the spookytoral well done great job
-josh
Hi Fortune liked you’r story I probably would have gotten startled ? when the door slammed.
Jamie H
Hi Fortune I like the way that had a bit of Halloween theme in it.Keep up the good work >https://mrrussell.100wc.net/my-different-life/
Sincerely Carrington
Hi Fortune love your story are you sure it ditn’t scare great story and keep up the great work
-Ben Q
mrrussell.100wc.net
Hi Fortune,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
I think I’d be a more of a “Friendland” kind of person. “Spookytoral” would definitely spook and startle me!
Good work this week.
Many thanks again for all the wonderful comments you give the boys in my class.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/
Hi Fortune, I really like the way you set the scene, but telling us the date and where you were. Sounds like a really fun day. I’m not sure I’d be so brave on ‘Spookytoral’ though.
Hi fortune
It is Katie!
I loved reading your story. You sound very brave! Well done!
Katie