WK7: The Spooky Trail

On the 31/10/15, my family and I went to Tramore  in Waterford to have fun at the fair. My parents gave my brother and I €50.

My baby brother wanted to go to Friendland, while I wanted to go on the Spookytoral so we fissured  the money and we got €25 each.

When I got to the Spookytoral, I had to pay €10 then  I penetrated into the seat. After that,the ride initiated and when I was in the Spookytoral, I saw spooky things like bats and ghost then I saw a door and as the door slammed I knew that it was meant to startle somebody but it didn’t scare me.

After all that,that was the end of the jaunt.

7 thoughts on “WK7: The Spooky Trail”

  1. Hi Fortune liked you’r story I probably would have gotten startled ? when the door slammed.

    Jamie H

  2. Hi Fortune love your story are you sure it ditn’t scare great story and keep up the great work

    -Ben Q

  3. Hi Fortune,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I think I’d be a more of a “Friendland” kind of person. “Spookytoral” would definitely spook and startle me!
    Good work this week.
    Many thanks again for all the wonderful comments you give the boys in my class.
    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


  4. Hi Fortune, I really like the way you set the scene, but telling us the date and where you were. Sounds like a really fun day. I’m not sure I’d be so brave on ‘Spookytoral’ though.

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