WK27: The Running Competition

One sunny day, three brisk,thin boys named Fortune, Collins and Excel entered a running competition for their school.

The next day, they went to the competition. There were 4 courses of the competition. Fortune, Excel and Collins failed the 3 courses of the competition so they were down to the last course.

The last course initiated and they were last place. Although, they ran quickly, there were still not making enough progress because they didn’t work together.

Next, their P.E teacher hollered out “Work Together”. Fortune, Collins and Excel harkened to the P.E teacher so they won the last course.

After that, they got back to school with their medals on their neck.

14 thoughts on “WK27: The Running Competition”

  1. Hi Fortune
    I love this story I loved the way you Excel and Collins had to work together to win the race . Keep up the great work Fortune

    -Ben Q

  2. Hi there Fortune
    That was an excellent story which I enjoyed
    I liked the names you used in your story
    It reminded me of the Cork City sport’s race
    It got me thinking was the P.E teacher in charge of the race???
    Thank you for commenting on my story and be sure to comment next week!!!
    Laurynas 😎 ,
    Mrs Sullivan’s class.

  3. Hello Fortune.O
    I like the part of your story when: There were 4 courses of the competition. Fortune, Excel and Collins failed the 3 courses of the competition so they were down to the last course.
    Please make more story’s keep up the great work.
    If you want to visit my class go to this website:https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/

  4. Hi fortune O.
    I like your story it’s a story that says you need to work together. Thank you for this superb work and I hope you have a good morning or afternoon.
    By the way thank you for commenting on my story ^.^
    Check out some of our great 100 word challenges https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/!
    Goodbye!
    Denyzy

  5. Hi Fortune O
    I loved your story . Just be careful you said , the won the race it should
    be they won the race. Maybe next time you write a story you should read over
    it to make sure it fully makes since.
    Thank you for always commenting an my stories
    Come read our stories at https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/
    From Hannah

  6. Hi Fortune,
    your story is just amazing.
    I love running a race.
    Your story is just like mine.
    Comment on my story in msbrennocksclass.100wc.net

  7. Hi Fortune,
    your story is just amazing.
    I love running a race.
    Your story is just like mine.
    Comment on my story in msbrennocksclass.100wc.net
    Whitney

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