WK26: The Bike Competition

Once, lived a thin,tiny girl named Danielle. She’s a very good cyclist so she signed herself up for a bike competition. 

When Danielle got to the competition, the other cyclists said to her that she was tiny and it was hopeless for her to win. It hurt Danielle’s feelings but she put the hurtful words aside then she focused on the competition.

Next, Danielle was on the ramp with her shiny yellow BMX bike to do her bike skills. She was done lot of great bike moves and luckily she won the competition.

After Danielle won the competition, the cyclists who said hurtful words to Danielle, apologised to her.

After that, Danielle went home being ecstatic.


7 thoughts on “WK26: The Bike Competition”

  1. Hi Fortune,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    I was delighted to read that Danielle won the competition in the end. It was also good to see that the others apologised for their hurtful comments.
    Your story reminded me a little of The Hare and the Tortoise.
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


  2. Hi there Fortune
    That was a great story with a great twist in the end.
    I loved the way you used lots of good words.
    It reminded me of a cycling competition which I watched on T.V.
    It got me thinking, what was prize for first place???
    Thank you very much for commenting on my story and be sure to keep doing that.
    Laurynas 😎
    Mrs O Sullivan’s class.

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