WK13: City Hall Opens

Once, there was a sinewy, strong and energetic superhero called Nicort. Nicort had a heinous insidious villain called Zoocarus who can control animals. By the way, Nicort lived in a town called Appletopia.

Zoocarus had a plan to rule over the world by making animals in the City Hall to kill the mayor and the people of Appletopia when the City Hall opens. ( which it’s tomorrow )

The next day, Nicort wore an unsuspiciously clothing so that he could catch Zoocarus at a blink of an eye. When Zoocarus started his mission, Nicort was distracted by an alluring Australian kangaroo statue.

After that, Nicort realised that he was distracted, so the first thing was to get the people of Appletopia out of the City Hall before the animals hurt them, but the tiger was blocking the escape. Thankfully, there was an exit behind the City Hall so they quickly ran to the exit before then animals blocked and they made it.

By the way, Zoocarus got killed by the animals because the got to deranged.

2 thoughts on “WK13: City Hall Opens”

  1. Hi Fortune
    Your vocabulary is excellent.
    I hope you write more story’s like this because they really get me interested .
    I like the part when zoocarus got all the people out of the hall I taught that was really taughtful .
    Goodbye Matthew D
    Mrs Boyce’s class

  2. Hi Fortune,
    I enjoyed reading your story again this week. Well done.
    I was glad that the people of Appletopia got out of the City Hall before the animals hurt them.
    At least their town is safe now.
    Good work this week.
    Congratulations on getting pupil of the month in Mr Russell’s Class.
    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)


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